Literary Analysis: Revising Rough Draft

LiteratureLiterature9th/10th/11th
Assigned: Dec 15, 2025
In class

Assignment Description

In this lesson, students focused on revising their literary analysis essays with attention to both clarity and style. After reviewing key writing techniques such as sentence variety, strong verbs, precise word choice, and effective use of evidence, students spent extended time revising their drafts using teacher and peer feedback. Through guided revision stations and small group read alouds of their concluding paragraphs, students practiced refining their voice, strengthening their analysis, and crafting conclusions that leave a lasting impression. The lesson emphasized that revision is an essential part of thoughtful writing and that strong writing makes learning meaningful and lasting.

Student Progress

Student Status Completed Actions
AS
Abigail Sohn
Ambrose
Complete Dec 15, 3:48 PM
CT
Claire Taylor
Augustine
Complete Dec 16, 12:13 PM
JS
Jonathan Sohn
Ambrose
Complete Dec 16, 10:06 AM
KM
Katelyn Matthews
Aquinas
Pending
KS
Kiana Starr
Athanasius
Complete Dec 16, 2:30 PM
MV
Mikko Villas
Aquinas
Complete Dec 24, 11:39 AM
SM
Sophie Miller
Athanasius
Complete Dec 16, 10:52 AM