Literary Analysis: Revising Rough Draft
Literature •
Literature •
9th/10th/11th
Assignment Description
In this lesson, students focused on revising their literary analysis essays with attention to both clarity and style. After reviewing key writing techniques such as sentence variety, strong verbs, precise word choice, and effective use of evidence, students spent extended time revising their drafts using teacher and peer feedback. Through guided revision stations and small group read alouds of their concluding paragraphs, students practiced refining their voice, strengthening their analysis, and crafting conclusions that leave a lasting impression. The lesson emphasized that revision is an essential part of thoughtful writing and that strong writing makes learning meaningful and lasting.
Student Progress
| Student | Status | Completed | Actions |
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AS
Abigail Sohn
Ambrose
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Complete | Dec 15, 3:48 PM | |
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CT
Claire Taylor
Augustine
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Complete | Dec 16, 12:13 PM | |
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JS
Jonathan Sohn
Ambrose
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Complete | Dec 16, 10:06 AM | |
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KM
Katelyn Matthews
Aquinas
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Pending | — | |
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KS
Kiana Starr
Athanasius
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Complete | Dec 16, 2:30 PM | |
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MV
Mikko Villas
Aquinas
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Complete | Dec 24, 11:39 AM | |
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SM
Sophie Miller
Athanasius
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Complete | Dec 16, 10:52 AM |